The music, the lyrics, the people, the rhymes,
The words and the voices, echo in time.
Over and over like waves crashing down,
Shoving, and pushing, and knocking around.
Echoes of noises and theories of sound,
Motion and stillness, dancing are bound.
Upwards and downwards, and under the bed,
Flowing and rushing and hushing in dread.
The music, the colors, the people, the rhymes,
The words and the images echo in time.
Sapping and sucking, making one dry,
Deserts of emptiness looming are neigh.
Echoes of stillness hiding in chaos,
Echoes of laughter hiding in tears,
Echoes of sadness hiding in pride,
And echoes of self hiding in time.
Knowledge and wisdom are hiding in darkness,
Painted on landscapes, pictures of starkness.
Wearily seeking them yet one never finds,
They hide in the corners lost in the mind.
The music, the chaos, the people, the rhymes,
The words and the faces echo in time.
Running in terror never to find,
Solace and peace and presence of mind.
A short poem drawing a verbal picture of the sound of murmurs, it is also another attempt at introducing rhyming into my poems beginning my use of couplets. |
I was feeling paricularly patriotic on a drive through Virgina and wrote this. |
When I look across her rolling plains,
And gaze upon her snow-capped mounts,
I see nothing but beauty in her face,
I say, "My home, my land, my heart's true pride."
I stare across a valley deep,
At the mountain range,
Overhead the eagle cries,
"My home, my land, my heart's true pride."
Through her forest great I hike and see,
The leaves change from green to gold,
Then fall to the ground now covered in snow,
The wind howls cold, and whispers low,
"My home, my land, my heart's true pride."
Grace and majesty is all I see,
'Til I look at our nation's gate,
This land once ruled by godly men,
Who held their morals high,
Now led by men who trust not in God,
Who made this great land,
Hence she falls with shame,
With a deep dark fate,
"Alas," I cry, "my home, my land, my heart's true pride."
Another in my rhyming attempt at poetry, I also tried to write about something other than emotions, instead I gambled my hand at describing a natural object. |
Sweet smells the salty sea blown breeze,
Tilting-blown the wind bent trees,
Crashing fall the white capped waves.
Feel the senses, overwhelmed; all is but a daze.
Swim beneath the ocean's sky
'round the reef we silent fly.
Gaze upon the undersea,
Wonders be that few have seen.
Creator's wonders hail his glory,
All his works tell his story.
| I never realy cared much for rhyming, thinking that it was to rigid for my poetry, but I gave it a shot. This poem uses as simple "ababcdcd" patern, rhyming every second line with each other. |
Silent prayers whisper by
Floating on the breath warmed breeze
Rising slowly by and by
That tickle sides and angels tease
As they rise to heaven's Lord
Whisper all your silent prayers
Lo, the angels wield the swords.
A silent whimsical thought, floating here about and around,
Under and above the plane of consciousness,
Tickling that which is barely aware.
Swimming in the realm of memory,
Touching all those experiences,
Touching the good ones,
Touching the bad as well.
And slowly, slowly, if surfaces, a feeling, an emotion,
Gasp, and breathe, as it makes itself known to me.
The now is what matters,
This infintely long finite moment,
This is what counts.
The past is riddled with stories and happenings,
Full of joy and pain, the future is unknown.
To stop, to breathe the breath of now.
Lastest version
To dream, to dream
A touch, a fleeting thought
A whirl of emotions
It quickens one's breath.
A dream, another dream,
I dream of hope, of sweetness.
To dream, I wish to dream,
Of a reality that is yet to come.
Quite, shush, listen
A dream is singing
Quite, hear its lullaby
You restfull sleeping.
A touch, a sound,
A smell, a dream,
A breath of life
Is quite coming
Rest well, peace be still.
Know that dreams,
They do come true
Quite, listen.
Version Two
To dream, to dream
A touch, a fleeting thought
A whirl of emotions
Quickens one's breath.
A dream, another dream,
I dream of hope of sweetness.
To dream, I wish to dream,
Of reality that is yet to come.
Quite, shush, listen
A dream is singing.
Quite, hear its lullaby
You restfull sleeping.
A touch, a sound,
A smell, a dream,
A breath of life
Is quite coming
Rest well, peace be still.
Know dreams they do,
They do come true
Quite, listen.
Version One
To dream, to dream
A touch, a fleeting breath
A whirl of emotions
Quickens one's breath.
A dream, another dream,
I dream of hope of sweetness.
To dream, I wish to dream,
Of reality that is yet to come.
Quite, shush, listen
A dream is singing.
Quite, hear its lullaby
You restfull sleeping.
A touch, a sound,
A smell, a dream,
A breath of life
Is quite coming
Rest well, peace be still.
Know dreams they do,
They do come true
Quite, listen.
Burn the mighty fires of hell
Burn the lowly sinning man
Whose immortal soul has disappeared
Consumed by the devil's gruesome clan
Fearsome fires fueled by cries,
Cries of souls who've always feared
The saving wrath of the master's hand.